Vollyball competition
On august 19,2018 me and my friend from eskul volleyball there were volleyball competition in my school againnst 1 cileungsi,at 10:30 there volleyball competition sturted every player there were 6 people.
At 11:50 a volleyball player was rested and got a briefing from each school's voleyyball coach,after the break was over from my school team there wa replaced by 3 players and finally there match began for 2 hours finally the obtained from my school 19 and from another school there are 15 differences from 4 secor to aqualize the same time the first round match was finished every player from among the school's was rested for a moment to restore power:) after the break finished the second round match began after a white later from school i got a score of 21 and the opposing team got 18 and finally the second round ended and finally the volley ball team from my school won.
At 15:55 i and my volleyball team gathered in the middle of the field to received a prize from the committee in the from of a trophy and grateful that my volleyball team finally won 1st place
Good job Jafar, you used simple past tense and you put the orientation, event, reorientation paragraphs 👍
BalasHapus